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©2007-2009 ~Echostarter
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i was practicing. still need to improve a bit.

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:iconaerithsspirit:
I dig it:) Its always good to say you need to practice, or you will never improve :D

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very nice!

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:iconmoraltechnicality:
Well, since i know that you like critique because you are always trying to level up, I gotta tell you that the face is too saturated. Also the hilights would benefit from a color in them, it looks like a really flat white.

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i actually didn't use any white at all on this. but i DID heighten the saturation from what it originally was. that might have screwed it up. and that's prolly why the hilights look white.

thanks for the crit.

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you know what would really bring out your shadow's? if you use complimentary colors..like in the skin, use a shade of blue to shade. It may sound strange but it really makes a difference. it's just a suggestion. Also the white highlights(that aren't white since you said previously you didnt) look weird to me.

Otherwise, I really like this...and you are definitely improving.

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